Amazing as always. It all felt so real. I loved the way Simon had to adjust to associating Ryan with London, because it's easy to see how he would have fallen for Ryan's 'All American' persona when he first arrived in LA.
The vulnerability of Simon bottoming was also convincing, because the intimacy of Ryan watching him and having control would be a huge deal for Simon.
The remark about it taking Simon a 'little longer to get there these days' was a clever addition because it makes it more realistic, rather than something out of a porno!
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Date: 2009-06-19 12:40 pm (UTC)The vulnerability of Simon bottoming was also convincing, because the intimacy of Ryan watching him and having control would be a huge deal for Simon.
The remark about it taking Simon a 'little longer to get there these days' was a clever addition because it makes it more realistic, rather than something out of a porno!