Hurray! I'm already squeeing at Simon and Ryan, so different but themselves, and most importantly so different from each other. Loving small David, too, just for being there and being small. I especially like Simon's interviewer--he totally sounds like who that guy would be at that time.
I found one I think typo and amazingly remembered to note it:
He decided to ask the proprietor to take a picture of him and small David before they go..."
Did you mean "before they went?" or is it correct and it just sounds funny to me--which could totally be the case.
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Date: 2009-02-13 07:26 pm (UTC)I found one I think typo and amazingly remembered to note it:
He decided to ask the proprietor to take a picture of him and small David before they go..."
Did you mean "before they went?" or is it correct and it just sounds funny to me--which could totally be the case.