Seriously. Your research and grasp of history is excellent but what makes this work so well is the relationship between the characters. The banter is absolute and complete perfection and you get a good grasp on the characters and their thoughts and motivations almost right off. All the Rymon stuff is absolutely brilliant and I'm just waiting to see where you take this and how it all weaves together.
And I love seeing how random people pop up in these things, it's one of ym favorite things about AUs, seeing how people are cast and the ways they are woven into the fabric of the story.
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Date: 2009-02-20 01:40 pm (UTC)Seriously. Your research and grasp of history is excellent but what makes this work so well is the relationship between the characters. The banter is absolute and complete perfection and you get a good grasp on the characters and their thoughts and motivations almost right off. All the Rymon stuff is absolutely brilliant and I'm just waiting to see where you take this and how it all weaves together.
And I love seeing how random people pop up in these things, it's one of ym favorite things about AUs, seeing how people are cast and the ways they are woven into the fabric of the story.
Can't wait to see what's next!