so i'm all behind on my commenting but i have to give love to this because it's one of my favorite chapters of all. i'm so glad my suggestions worked for you- it was amazing to begin with, but i adore how it turned out.
i love ryan in this chapter, so spiffy and "on" but so sad underneath. and so cute, and hot, how what's happening between blake and chris can't be stopped, can hardly be delayed for more than a few hours. and my favorite thing of all- the little exchange about others and "i'm not a fag." it's achingly real.
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Date: 2007-10-08 12:45 pm (UTC)i love ryan in this chapter, so spiffy and "on" but so sad underneath. and so cute, and hot, how what's happening between blake and chris can't be stopped, can hardly be delayed for more than a few hours. and my favorite thing of all- the little exchange about others and "i'm not a fag." it's achingly real.