Date: 2007-10-03 01:30 pm (UTC)
Blake was gay, and Chris had a crush on him, or maybe more than that, and now Blake's unattainability went from being an untouchable straight man who was also his writing partner to being an out-of-his-league gay man who was also his writing partner.

Awww, Chris. He wants you too. I love Chris' characterization. I really think that real time Chris was worried about the same stuff.

A blond head popped from around the corner. "So I was thinking, I decided to make an Italian dinner, and you know it always splatters, so since it's just us let's eat in our undershirts and keep our shirts clean for the club."

Ha, ha, ha BLAKE. I can't believe Chris bought that story.

But he couldn't help glancing over at Blake, at his strong arms and the muscles in his back. In a suit Blake often looked elfin, but in his undershirt he looked more like one of those tiny but powerful mountain cats that Chris had seen on Wild Kingdom once.

Mmmm, yes. When Blake layers he looks so different than when he is in just a tshirt.

"The Kittens, they're like laundry soap. You look them over and if you like the packaging, you buy them. I didn't want to be a product, but that's because I'm stubborn and egotistical."

This is so very Blake. It's not just because he is stubborn and egotistical. It is also because he cares deeply about his music. That was a great bit of characterization.

Chris blinked. "Um, okay?"

Hee! I bet Chris does that a lot with Blake.

"I'm really going to regret this," Chris said, and before Blake could answer he leaned over and kissed him. He only meant to try a quick kiss but Blake wouldn't let him go, prolonging the kiss until they were breathless and had to pull apart. "No," Blake answered. "If I have to I'll spend the rest of my life making sure you never, ever regret that."

That was a PERFECT first kiss. Love.

...the next thing he remembered was trying very hard not to kiss in the cab, which mostly led to giggling and inappropriate touching where the driver couldn't see them.

This also sounds very much like real life Chris and Blake. I can totally see this happening.

Chris's hands slid down Blake's back, resting on his hips, then pulled Blake into his lap. "God, I can feel you," Blake said, sitting up and shifting a little. He reached down to unbutton Chris's shirt.

This was just gorgeously choreographed. I can see it. I could almost feel Chris myself. Powerful imagery.

"Not as disgusting as asking you not to talk." He leaned over and kissed Chris, who wrapped his arms around Blake and pulled him close. Blake shifted and their legs entwined. "I want you to talk to me. Lots."

So cute.

"Hi, Chris. Mmm, wanna fuck again?"

Yes, please.

I am really, really loving these and it was killing me to be so behind on them. I hate when real life interferes with my boy stories. It is exciting to have two more to read right now though. Thank you!
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