This was really, really a creative way of showing the passage of time and how their relationship grew. I am so impressed.
I did though, give me less things to quote because of the format. Which is probably a good thing, you are most likely sick of having to re-read half your story to get at my comments. ;) The reverse shots at the museum were my favorite part and this.
Wait. You want to be a madcap heiress, don't you?"
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Date: 2007-10-03 10:25 pm (UTC)I did though, give me less things to quote because of the format. Which is probably a good thing, you are most likely sick of having to re-read half your story to get at my comments. ;) The reverse shots at the museum were my favorite part and this.
Wait. You want to be a madcap heiress, don't you?"
Yes!
"Why did I ever think you were straight?
I bet Chris has said this IRL.