Holy crap, this is just phenomenal, seriously. Seriously, I have stars in my eyes right now, I never wanted this story to end. I love the world you built up, and the roles you had for everyone involved--Nero's role in the story was particularly inspired, and I was laughing hysterically as I realized he was basically a stand-in for James Cameron. HEE. The progression of Jim and McCoy's relationship was just perfect--it wasn't rushed at all, and as a reader, I enjoyed seeing them at each stage of their relationship. Really, absolutely tremendous.