I'm loving the way you're including all the various idol characters with nods to how they appeared on the show and such.

Ryan and Simon manage to be so sweet.

The coversation about straight-acting was hilarious and really nicely done.

Tatiana's looking suspect to me right now. She was babysitting for a friend and Megan had to call home to her sitter to get the message. Easy enough for her to switch the drop-off spot...

You're really good at keeping the pace just right, nothing happening too quickly but just enough happening to build suspense while still answering questions.

Can't wait for the next bit.