First, couple of small typos you may or may not want to bother fixing:
"which was find as Seamus" "despite his neck being bend"
That said...I really liked this! I love how you don't give into the obvious potential for shippiness, and opted instead for a lighter touch -- nothing overt in terms of their lusting after each other, but enough hinting to leave we readers smirking. ;}
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"which was find as Seamus"
"despite his neck being bend"
That said...I really liked this! I love how you don't give into the obvious potential for shippiness, and opted instead for a lighter touch -- nothing overt in terms of their lusting after each other, but enough hinting to leave we readers smirking. ;}