I think the story made ME feel a little uncomfortable, too, which is why it took so long to write and I was worried about posting it. But I have to say, I'm very happy with it. I definitely was hoping that you could see their personalities from the way they have sex—you certainly can in real life—so I'm very glad that came across. Since this really came to me as a set piece, an erotic tale as it were, I wasn't thinking too much about their lives outside of what went on in this room. But that may also be because, since they pretty much are the EWFS characters, I have them very firmly in my mind.

Thank you so much for this review!