Hurray! I'm already squeeing at Simon and Ryan, so different but themselves, and most importantly so different from each other. Loving small David, too, just for being there and being small. I especially like Simon's interviewer--he totally sounds like who that guy would be at that time.

I found one I think typo and amazingly remembered to note it:

He decided to ask the proprietor to take a picture of him and small David before they go..."

Did you mean "before they went?" or is it correct and it just sounds funny to me--which could totally be the case.