ext_107291 ([identity profile] cynikls.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] the_water_clock 2007-09-24 03:26 pm (UTC)

I'd wanted to comment on the previous chapter but I pretty much forgot. So here I am commenting on this one!

You've crafted a comprehensive world that is just so full of little details and background notes that just make your fic come alive. Everything feels so realistic and authentic, at least from my point of view. But really it's just the attention to details that makes me enjoy this fic thus far.

And I love the dynamic between 60s!Cake. Especially this line which is just so beautiful: But he never forgot how Blake looked, sitting at that table and staring at him as though he were a particularly rare sort of butterfly, one that he hadn't figured out how to catch.

Thanks for writing and I look forward to the next one :)

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