And now, since I'm at a real computer, my favorite bit:
Ryan tries to move out of his own head and into the moment, even though as he does he remembers that the inability to do just that is why he never could act worth a shit.
That just cracks me up, because you know it is so very true. :))
Also, I don't say this often enough but I very much love the real-ness to your sex scenes. Yes, they are hot and that is all well and good, but the fact that the characters actually respond like real people is sublime. (Which just makes it surreal as this fic is, indeed, about real people... my head go splodey now, because were it not for this horrid illness I would never advocate RPS at all, as it squicks me terribly. I blame the meds for my obsession with this pairing yesterday.)
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Ryan tries to move out of his own head and into the moment, even though as he does he remembers that the inability to do just that is why he never could act worth a shit.
That just cracks me up, because you know it is so very true. :))
Also, I don't say this often enough but I very much love the real-ness to your sex scenes. Yes, they are hot and that is all well and good, but the fact that the characters actually respond like real people is sublime. (Which just makes it surreal as this fic is, indeed, about real people... my head go splodey now, because were it not for this horrid illness I would never advocate RPS at all, as it squicks me terribly. I blame the meds for my obsession with this pairing yesterday.)