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Author: Clio
Title: Entwined
Pairing: Harry Potter: Seamus Finnigan/Dean Thomas
Rating: NC-17
[ profile] fanfic100prompt: 041—Shapes
Summary: Seamus likes things to have the best use for their form.
Length: 300 words
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Notes: Originally written as Christmas present comment porn for [ profile] legomymalfoy, so seriously unbeta'd. Further proof that I cannot write HP under 300 words. I'm pleased I waited a little bit to post this as it goes so perfectly with this icon by [ profile] kaalee!

This is the way it happens: Standing on tiptoe to kiss your boyfriend is shockingly girly, and Seamus is small, so he cajoles, or flirts, or jumps, or sits on the lap, or otherwise tackles so that Dean comes down to him--not to his level, really, as they have always been on the same level, but so that he is within striking distance.

Then he uses his entire body to make sure that Dean is paying full and appropriate attention to the proceedings. Dean occasionally escapes into his head, into the art, into that space that isn't really on the Earth, but sex is about the body, about the now, about being fully present. Seamus reckons that is his role in Dean's life, to keep him from floating off into the aether. Oddly, at school it was the other way round.

Dean's cock is long and slender, which Seamus thinks is perfect for fucking, while his own is shorter and thicker, perfect for sucking, so that is usually the scenario. Change can be good, sure, but Seamus likes things to have the best use for their form. Besides, Dean's lips are amazing, and Seamus's arse is amazing, so who would argue with that? Seamus wanks to the memory of his cock sliding in and out of Dean's full lips, or to the way Dean's dark, long fingers sink into the flesh of his pale thighs as he pulls Seamus on and off his own cock.

And after, when they are in a sweaty pile on the bed, or the couch, or the kitchen floor, or the model platform in the studio, Seamus pushes his floppy fringe out of his eyes and burrows into Dean's chest, or Dean lays his head on Seamus. And then they kiss, because when they are laying together everything is within reach.

Date: 2006-02-28 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
And then they kiss, because when they are laying together everything is within reach.

I like this. A fitting end to your ficlet.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks so much! I find that ending something short is really tricky, so I'm very pleased you like the ending.

Date: 2006-02-28 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh, that's lovely! :) Been too long since I read Deamus.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you! S/D, so very excellent.

Date: 2006-02-28 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ohhh, Deamus love!!! ♥

They are so cute for each other, it's not even funny.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you!

Date: 2006-02-28 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aw that was so cute!! that's excellent for only 300 words, good job! XD

Date: 2006-03-01 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks so much!

Date: 2006-02-28 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Absolutely gorgeous, well done for 300 words. :) I love Deamus. :D

Date: 2006-03-01 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you!

Date: 2006-02-28 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh!

That is the only sound I could make after reading this, and I know that sounds dirty but it's more excitement at the awesomeness of this fic than anything, I promise.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
hahaha, no worries. Thank you so much!

Date: 2006-02-28 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*big goofy grin*

Besides, Dean's lips are amazing, and Seamus's arse is amazing, so who would argue with that?

and this fic is amazing, so who would argue with that?

Date: 2006-03-01 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ha! Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

Date: 2006-03-01 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
God, I love this. ♥

So perfectly how I see them and so simple, but it really explains so much more.

you know? we have totally got to talk seamus/dean one day.

and, clearly, I must have subconsciously known you were going to write this when I made the icons. :)

Date: 2006-03-01 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aww, thank you! I think that it was that the icon reminded me that I needed to properly post this instead of just leaving it in its place in a comment.

We really do, and I'll be down your way shortly to visit [ profile] wordplay and [ profile] evil_erato among other people so we should definitely meet face to face!

Date: 2006-03-02 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
yes!! [ profile] wordplay mentioned that as a possibility when I last saw her. [did she tell you I'm hosting a silly little fannish thinger?] But, I'd really adore to talk the w00bs with you - especially face to face! [though, I tend to be a bit enthusiastic and twirly face to face. I'll try not to be scary.]

Date: 2006-03-05 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I was at NIMBUS, TWH, and POANYC. I don't think there's anything you can do that would actually scare me. Seriously.

I have a date--weekend of 18-19th March! So I hope to see you then!

Date: 2006-03-05 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
hahahaha, good to know! ♥

Oh, yes! I don't think I have very much going on then at all, so we'll have to try to get together! That would be fantastic! [*snort* I should make you a shipper bracelet (]

Date: 2006-03-03 01:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I love you! You're my favorite fanfic author I think! (well, you and madeyemax) I love how you portray Dean and Seamus! Much love from your #1 fangirl ^_^

Date: 2006-03-04 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh my goodness! I'm so flattered, thank you so very much!

Date: 2006-03-15 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I liked the thing about bringing Dean down to within striking distance. Its cute. I also like the idea of keeping Dean from "floating away"

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